growing up blues

dear you,
I happen to write blank verse once in a while and I do like it when folks read it . The following one was written a month or two after i turned eighteen and realised i never felt so lonely in my life. check it out and do tell me if you like it.

" I could have screamed,
yelled out and thrown a tantrum.
But, I had no time and
there was no one to blame.

Or, I could have cried,
one lonely night,bitter and sullen,
But i had no courage
to lose control and lose myself.

And after all that ,
All I did was shed a tear,
one tear which ran down ,
before being lost to the world ,
witnessed the soul that makes me what i am now."

no issues now though. it was a little time back....

love,
prathyush.

p.s: I love writing postscripts.